#scenes
- Excessive focus on one character
- Lacking in descriptions or pointers about setting and time
- Too much dialogue
- Too much exposition
- Bad word choice (this one never reallyends, does it?)
- Lacking atmosphere
- Lacking motivation/goals
- Lacking tension
- An abnormally slow pacing
- One active character and the rest being passive
Kdrama: Pur Beloved Summer
like or reblog if you save ♡
Kdrama: Hometown Cha Cha Cha
like or reblog if you save ♡
Kdrama: My Roommate Is A Gumiho
like or reblog if you save ♡
Kdrama: My Roommate Is A Gumiho
like or reblog if you save ♡
Kdrama: Doom At Your Service
like or reblog if you save ♡
Kdrama: So I Married An Anti-fan
like or reblog if you save ♡
The whumpee is waterboarded in champagne/alcohol
(Happy New Year!)
The whumper takes away the whumpee’s inhaler
The whumpee wakes up to find themselves strangling a loved one
The doctors don’t numb the area before a spinal tap
TW: noncon
The whumper regularly, publicly noncons the whumpee as entertainment for their friends and to incite jealousy and fear from their enemies.
The rescuer witnesses this while disguised in the crowd
TW: Noncon
Tw: Mind Control
TW: Some of these get pretty dark
TW: Masturbation
i for one would love some mind control-based noncon whump but if you’re uncomfortable with that subject don’t push yourself to do it
This has been much requested and I finally thought some up!
Forcing the whumpee to believe they’re with someone they love
Forcing the whumpee to believe they’re HURTING someone they love
Forcing the whumpee to touch themselves
Forcing the whumpee to pull away at the last moment and denying them relief
Forcing the whumpee to stay aware of what’s happening but unable to control their body
Trick the love interest into thinking the whumpee wants what’s happening
Force the whumpee to plead and beg
Force the whumpee to agree to anything
Force the whumpee into faking a relationship to prolong things
Have the whumpee strip and stay that way for prolonged amounts of time
Have the whumpee say that they want it
Have the whumpee thank the whumper
Lock a loved one/caretaker in a nearby room and force the whumpee to be loud
Make them legitimately want what’s happening
Make them relax
Make them tense
Make them indulge in different kinds of kinks, especially if they wouldn’t normally
Convince the whumpee that the mind control only works if deep down they wanted this to happen
Force the whumpee to forget it ever happened at all